Missing space after a comma:
I also learned to have an emergency kit ready at hand, at home, filled with drink, food and spare eneloop and lithium AA batteries and a few flashlights.
With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.
Should be: With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.
Eneloop: simply the best! / Eneloop: Simply the best!
to be the top in the NiMH battery industry till today. / to be the top in the NiMH battery industry to this day.
Special editions batteries / Special edition batteries
All chargers 2005-today / All chargers 2005 - Today
not all of their chargers are good / not all of their chargers are good.
called Dumb chargers / called dumb chargers
warmer, even bicycles and more. / warmer, bicycles and more.
From eneloop test results page
can have an advantage is very low current devices / can have an advantage in very low current devices
Eneloops are not only powerful but also some very high quality cells that track close. / Eneloops are not only powerful high quality cells, they are consistent from cell to cell
The next test is done for a comparison / The next test is a comparison
From full line up 2005-2017 page
For the full line-up of alle eneloop limited / special edition / For the full line-up of all eneloop limited / special edition
An interesting observation that this generation / An interesting observation is that this generation
Launch date: 2014/2015 depending on the market) (*2) / Launch date: 2014/2015 (depending on the market) (*2)
From Special edition batteries page
From 2009 eneloop`s / From 2009 eneloop
there have been made exactly 21 different kinds of limited editions / there has been 21 different kinds of limited edition batteries made
Happy to help edit, here’s a suggested improvement to the first paragraph:
Eneloop: simply the best!
You get to know everything about eneloops Learn more information about the history of eneloop batteries, and which are the best value today.
We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wikipedia.
I’d delete this sentence since it offers no value.
Eneloop batteries were (changed to plural to be consistent) first introduced in November 2005 by Sanyo Japan. Tests have continued to show that these are the best performing batteries in the industry.
In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries. In 2009 limited they also produced a Tones edition and in 2010 their first Low capacity version, (for low-drain devices) the Eneloop Lite. In the same year, a high-capacity model (for high-drain devices) was also produced and was called Eneloop XX/PRO.
In general, the language is pretty rough, but you should be focusing on your site benefits, not just the history of eneloop.
You said: Since then they regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers
I think updated should be update since updated is past tense. So you should have this instead: “Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”, or this “Since then they have regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”
nquinn has a good point about the homepage. I will probably delete quite a bit of text and focus on the benefits of the site... good idea. Just don`t know how much to delete yet.
The same sentence “In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries……. Eneloop XX/PRO” is written twice on the first page. Is it a mistake ?
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