GiveAway: Set of Eneloop batteries!!

“Where should I store my batteries? And at what temperature?

You are best of storing it in a dry cool place.

A better sentence would be:
“Your best bet would be storing them in a cool, dry place”
or
“Your best bet would be…”

4AA please, thanks for the GAW.

Clever idea! You get your website text reviewed and edited, and in exchange, we get a great giveaway! :wink:

I’m NOT in for this one, as I’ve got all the Eneloops I need from when you used to sell them here. :crown: :+1:

“First make sure what you want to use the charger for,”

Suggested: “First, determine your intended purpose: ”

4AA

Under Eneloop prototype products

When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these types of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design.

Missing space after a comma:
I also learned to have an emergency kit ready at hand, at home, filled with drink, food and spare eneloop and lithium AA batteries and a few flashlights.

Thanks for the GAW. :slight_smile:

Not in!

As a fellow fan of Eneloops I’d happily assist without compensation. Just let me know when you’d like proofreading.

With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.

Should be: With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.

4AA for me please.

Count me in,

Here are some corrections I would suggest.

Original / Corrected

Main page

Eneloop: simply the best! / Eneloop: Simply the best!
to be the top in the NiMH battery industry till today. / to be the top in the NiMH battery industry to this day.
Special editions batteries / Special edition batteries
All chargers 2005-today / All chargers 2005 - Today
not all of their chargers are good / not all of their chargers are good.
called Dumb chargers / called dumb chargers
warmer, even bicycles and more. / warmer, bicycles and more.

From eneloop test results page

can have an advantage is very low current devices / can have an advantage in very low current devices
Eneloops are not only powerful but also some very high quality cells that track close. / Eneloops are not only powerful high quality cells, they are consistent from cell to cell
The next test is done for a comparison / The next test is a comparison

From full line up 2005-2017 page

For the full line-up of alle eneloop limited / special edition / For the full line-up of all eneloop limited / special edition
An interesting observation that this generation / An interesting observation is that this generation
Launch date: 2014/2015 depending on the market) (*2) / Launch date: 2014/2015 (depending on the market) (*2)

From Special edition batteries page

From 2009 eneloop`s / From 2009 eneloop
there have been made exactly 21 different kinds of limited editions / there has been 21 different kinds of limited edition batteries made

Will post later some other corrections I find…

Thanks!

So many corrections, do you regret the givaway already, Chibi? :stuck_out_tongue: :party:

I’m in,
It all sounds a bit too Dutch to me.
Try not to make it sound too Dutch.

Love the comments.

Thanks everyone, keep them coming.

Well, I have asked it before, but without many replies about the content, so this way I can at least get some real feedback :) yeehaa

Uhmmm kind of :p

Happy to help edit, here’s a suggested improvement to the first paragraph:

Eneloop: simply the best!

You get to know everything about eneloops Learn more information about the history of eneloop batteries, and which are the best value today.

We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wikipedia.

I’d delete this sentence since it offers no value.

Eneloop batteries were (changed to plural to be consistent) first introduced in November 2005 by Sanyo Japan. Tests have continued to show that these are the best performing batteries in the industry.

In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries. In 2009 limited they also produced a Tones edition and in 2010 their first Low capacity version, (for low-drain devices) the Eneloop Lite. In the same year, a high-capacity model (for high-drain devices) was also produced and was called Eneloop XX/PRO.

In general, the language is pretty rough, but you should be focusing on your site benefits, not just the history of eneloop.

*List of specialized battery chargers and analyzers

easey should be easy

*Rewrapped eneloops
Sony CycleEnergy
AA: NH-AA-B4GN
AAA: NH-AAA-B4GN

doesn’t make sense

You said: Since then they regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers

I think updated should be update since updated is past tense. So you should have this instead: “Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”, or this “Since then they have regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”

I think I got everything changed up till now.

nquinn has a good point about the homepage. I will probably delete quite a bit of text and focus on the benefits of the site... good idea. Just don`t know how much to delete yet.

In the FAQ section (and on other occasions) you used an accent character instead of an apostrophe:

…, you can only charge it till 70% of it`s full capacity.

Use either “it’s” or “it’s”.

(AA)

Actually it should be “its” without an apostrophe.

Special editions batteries sounds weird, maybe go with “Special edition batteries” instead?

I need AAA’s if I win :slight_smile:

The same sentence “In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries……. Eneloop XX/PRO” is written twice on the first page. Is it a mistake ?
(AA)

Located one at http://eneloop101.com/batteries/rewrapped-batteries/
Mainly avaialble in Europe and Asia
Thanks for the giveaway!