GiveAway: Set of Eneloop batteries!!

Eneloop Give Away.

Rules:

1. Be a BLF member from before: November 21, 2017

2. Have more than 5 posts.

3. Only post ONCE in this thread per person. If you find more mistakes great, but put them into 1 post.

4. Not a member who mostly just participates in giveaways on BLF.

How to enter:

I need an extra pair of (English) eyes.

  1. Please visit the eneloop101.com website and simply find any sentence that is incorrect, strange, unclear, could-be-improved, has wrong grammar, is-plain-stupid, is-too-Dutch... (that shouldn`t be too difficult ;) )
  2. A. Post the sentence in your reply plus the "better version" (no need to link or anything as I can find them easily)
  3. B. If you can`t find any mistakes please just post what you like to see being added to the site
  4. Tell me whether you prefer to receive 4AA or 4AAA batteries when you win.


  5. This one is NOT a requirement to enter:if you`d like please give the eneloop101 facebook page a thumbsup. (I will probably do some sort of giveaway for the facebook page members in the future as well)

Example post:

You can make up your own text of course

"envelopes are rechargeable batteries"

Should be: Eneloops are rechargeable batteries

4AA for me please

Closing date: I will close the giveaway somewhere around Black Friday....or Cyber Monday..... or....... :)


I will use Random.org to draw a number

What you`ll get?

4-pack of AA or AAA std eneloop batteries

I will order the batteries directly from an online store and let them ship them to the winner

If you want to enter, but can`t find any (new/other) mistakes because your English isn`t your mother tongue, just let me know... and I can come up with something else just for you guys.

List of participants. (Should have reserved post 1 for that ;)

  1. Tatasal
  2. eebowler
  3. zulumoose
  4. DoubleA
  5. Henk4U2
  6. FPV
  7. Pete7874
  8. vwpieces
  9. Agro
  10. Litefighter
  11. an0nemus
  12. AlexGT
  13. nquinn
  14. dekozn
  15. SIGShooter
  16. Lilien
  17. Lionheart_2281
  18. Alcius
  19. titobustillo
  20. LG
  21. Blackbeard
  22. millerman
  23. SoCalTiger
  24. argolite
  25. dealgrabber2002
  26. hank
  27. brad (questionable suggestion :)
  28. ruffles
  29. asot
  30. octav
  31. samgalax
  32. Bort
  33. CJ Avlis
  34. pirate joe 22
  35. fx10a
  36. fran82
  37. jf_smm
  38. teacher

The winner will contacted through PM. He/She has 3 days to reply before I do another draw.

And the winner is #19

“Some are more obvious then others.”

"We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wkipedia." The first error is simple, 'We' should be We have or 'We've', so the sentence should start with We've got you covered.. Additionally, a comma after 'covered', would be appropriate. Finally (I don't know if this rule applies in 'American English', the name Eneloop should always start with a capital E. Corrected sentence: We've got you covered, with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to Eneloops on this website, referred to as the Eneloop Encyclopedia, aka, Eneloop Wikipedia. Of course, I could be wrong, because, I does talk reall different from how I does type eh..

4 AAA is my choice if lucky :)

Thanks.

“In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5th year anniversary ”

Should be: In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5 year anniversary
Or In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5th anniversary

4AAA for me please

The KIR-SE1 heats up till about 43 degrees Celsius, provides about 5 hours of continuous warming.

Missing comma after Celsius.

Update: combining my later posts into this one to make it a single post according to request by OP.

Safely warms your feet while your’e taking a nap or while you’re driving. It will turn off automatically with it’s built-in timer.

Portable warmer which can also be used while plugged into a wall socket.

Includes a USB port to charge your mobile devices at 500mA

Solar charger that can be folded in half, with a battery built-in to the 5V USB charger.

The device itself cannot charge those AA batteries, so they have to be charged separately.

Rechargeable lithium battery pack of 7350mAh capacity with two outputs of 9V each with a maximum of 2000mA. Used for musical instruments like a Distortion/Over drive, Digital delay/Digital reverb etc. Includes a power adapter to use with 100-240V AC.

The DS2AS is made for the Nintendo DS Lite (not 3ds) and the cord that is attached to it is not replaceable. So if you want to use a normal USB cable you will need the normal stick booster.

You can place your Nintendo Wii controller in this dock to charge it’s batteries.

Please note that the product code is universally used, even for different power packs.

Products listed below have been produced from 2005 till about 2013. However, most of these products are very hard to come by.

Anyhow it never made it into production, so we might never actually know any more details.

To charge your dedicated battery packs wirelessly with Qi (not the batteries in the middle of the photograph). When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these kind of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design.

A Japanese website displayed all kinds of these Eneloop Universe products:

I don`t have a clue to what this is

With the small font! But I can`t make up what is the device that these are in.

But looking at the 2 buttons on the front, it might be a wireless vacuum cleaner as well. Oh, actually the round piece that is attached to the wall might be it’s charge station, and you might be able to take the longer piece off from that hook, so that it can be used as a vacuum cleaner?… I guess…

Eneloop merchandise

Through multiple Eneloop promotions around the world, there has been lots of special merchandise out there.

Not very exciting, but I also found this one on their Facebook EU page.

This would indicate if there is still some charge left, but it does not indicate how much charge is left.

Probably a day or two earlier as I was able to get limited edition Eneloops a few days before actual release date.

Since Eneloopy appeared in the early days of the Eneloop hype, the following items are rare and difficult to find.

If somebody knows where to get them, please let me know.

In “Sanyo eneloop 2nd Generation”

X For the full line-up of alle eneloop ……

> For a full line-up of all eneloop ……

For me 4*AAA please :slight_smile:

Edit: when in doubt, write the brand name exactly as the company does: eneloop, not Eneloop.
Generation is just another word => 2nd generation

“Where should I store my batteries? And at what temperature?

You are best of storing it in a dry cool place.

A better sentence would be:
“Your best bet would be storing them in a cool, dry place”
or
“Your best bet would be…”

4AA please, thanks for the GAW.

Clever idea! You get your website text reviewed and edited, and in exchange, we get a great giveaway! :wink:

I’m NOT in for this one, as I’ve got all the Eneloops I need from when you used to sell them here. :crown: :+1:

“First make sure what you want to use the charger for,”

Suggested: “First, determine your intended purpose: ”

4AA

Under Eneloop prototype products

When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these types of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design.

Missing space after a comma:
I also learned to have an emergency kit ready at hand, at home, filled with drink, food and spare eneloop and lithium AA batteries and a few flashlights.

Thanks for the GAW. :slight_smile:

Not in!

As a fellow fan of Eneloops I’d happily assist without compensation. Just let me know when you’d like proofreading.

With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.

Should be: With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.

4AA for me please.

Count me in,

Here are some corrections I would suggest.

Original / Corrected

Main page

Eneloop: simply the best! / Eneloop: Simply the best!
to be the top in the NiMH battery industry till today. / to be the top in the NiMH battery industry to this day.
Special editions batteries / Special edition batteries
All chargers 2005-today / All chargers 2005 - Today
not all of their chargers are good / not all of their chargers are good.
called Dumb chargers / called dumb chargers
warmer, even bicycles and more. / warmer, bicycles and more.

From eneloop test results page

can have an advantage is very low current devices / can have an advantage in very low current devices
Eneloops are not only powerful but also some very high quality cells that track close. / Eneloops are not only powerful high quality cells, they are consistent from cell to cell
The next test is done for a comparison / The next test is a comparison

From full line up 2005-2017 page

For the full line-up of alle eneloop limited / special edition / For the full line-up of all eneloop limited / special edition
An interesting observation that this generation / An interesting observation is that this generation
Launch date: 2014/2015 depending on the market) (*2) / Launch date: 2014/2015 (depending on the market) (*2)

From Special edition batteries page

From 2009 eneloop`s / From 2009 eneloop
there have been made exactly 21 different kinds of limited editions / there has been 21 different kinds of limited edition batteries made

Will post later some other corrections I find…

Thanks!

So many corrections, do you regret the givaway already, Chibi? :stuck_out_tongue: :party:

I’m in,
It all sounds a bit too Dutch to me.
Try not to make it sound too Dutch.

Love the comments.

Thanks everyone, keep them coming.

Well, I have asked it before, but without many replies about the content, so this way I can at least get some real feedback :) yeehaa

Uhmmm kind of :p

Happy to help edit, here’s a suggested improvement to the first paragraph:

Eneloop: simply the best!

You get to know everything about eneloops Learn more information about the history of eneloop batteries, and which are the best value today.

We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wikipedia.

I’d delete this sentence since it offers no value.

Eneloop batteries were (changed to plural to be consistent) first introduced in November 2005 by Sanyo Japan. Tests have continued to show that these are the best performing batteries in the industry.

In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries. In 2009 limited they also produced a Tones edition and in 2010 their first Low capacity version, (for low-drain devices) the Eneloop Lite. In the same year, a high-capacity model (for high-drain devices) was also produced and was called Eneloop XX/PRO.

In general, the language is pretty rough, but you should be focusing on your site benefits, not just the history of eneloop.

*List of specialized battery chargers and analyzers

easey should be easy

*Rewrapped eneloops
Sony CycleEnergy
AA: NH-AA-B4GN
AAA: NH-AAA-B4GN

doesn’t make sense

You said: Since then they regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers

I think updated should be update since updated is past tense. So you should have this instead: “Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”, or this “Since then they have regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”