GiveAway: Set of Eneloop batteries!!

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You said: Since then they regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers

I think updated should be update since updated is past tense. So you should have this instead: “Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”, or this “Since then they have regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”

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I think I got everything changed up till now.

nquinn has a good point about the homepage. I will probably delete quite a bit of text and focus on the benefits of the site... good idea. Just don`t know how much to delete yet.

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In the FAQ section (and on other occasions) you used an accent character instead of an apostrophe:

“…, you can only charge it till 70% of it`s full capacity.”

Use either “it’s” or “it’s”.

(AA)

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Actually it should be “its” without an apostrophe.

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Special editions batteries sounds weird, maybe go with “Special edition batteries” instead?

I need AAA’s if I win :slight_smile:

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The same sentence “In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries……. Eneloop XX/PRO” is written twice on the first page. Is it a mistake ?
(AA)

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Located one at http://eneloop101.com/batteries/rewrapped-batteries/
Mainly avaialble in Europe and Asia
Thanks for the giveaway!

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In the About page, there’s the “my official name is” that irks my pedantic self a bit. I think it’s better to just say “my name is” or if you really want to be specific then “my real name is” or even “my legal name is”.

I already have 2 dozens of AAA for home use, so if I win I’d love to have some AAs :slight_smile: Thank you.

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thanks for GAW, need some AAA’s

on the rewrapped batteries page:

-But since FDK is owned by Fujitsu there are more and more batteries out there that have a “eneloop” inside of them.
replace letter a with the word an

In the next sentence replace follow with read, and maybe use one to one instead of one on one
-That being said, if you follow the following list carefully, you`ll see that they are not always one on one copies.

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Updated the site with the new ideas, thanks all! Keep them coming. Or for people who can't find anything, please read rule 3B :)

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Use the TOP menu to get to all the pages

Use the menu on the top of the page to Navigate this Website

4AA

thanks
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I can always use more AAs.

Homepage:

  • I would replace “A list of characteristics on how to spot some counterfeits.” with simply “How to spot counterfeits.”
  • I personally don’t like how the introductory paragraph reads. I would replace it with this: “Welcome to eneloop101.com aka Eneloop Encyclopedia aka Eneloop Wikipedia.We`ve got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to Eneloops!”
  • “Both, Sanyo and Panasonic made some interesting chargers.” Remove the comma.
  • “The sad thing is that not all of their chargers are good”. Personal preference: I would change “The sad thing is that” to “Unfortunately”.
  • “In 2009 limited they also produced a Tones edition and in 2010 their first Low capacity version”. Do not capitalize “Low”. Also change it to “low-capacity” (add hyphen).
  • “For the complete line-up of all 21 special editions watch All limited edition Eneloop batteries”. I would change the word “watch” to “see”.
  • “Watch all the Eneloop products (Eneloop Universe) ever produced”. Change to: “Click here to see all the products that Eneloop has ever produced (Eneloop Universe)” or more simply: “See all the products that Eneloop has ever produced (Eneloop Universe)”
  • In the last paragraph, in one place you have Eneloop Universe surrounded by single quotes and later on with double quotes ’ vs “. Make them consistent. I would use double quotes ”
  • “In 2009 Sanyo released their first limited edition eneloops, called Eneloop tones.” > “In 2009 Sanyo released their first limited edition Eneloops, called Eneloop Tones.”
  • “In 2010 Sanyo Eneloop celebrated their 5 year anniversary with a special edition Eneloop, called Eneloop Tones Glitter. Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers including Chocolate tones, Forest tones, with the latest addition being the Eneloop tones expedition.” > “In 2010 Sanyo Eneloop celebrated their 5 year anniversary with a special edition Eneloop, called Eneloop Tones Glitter. Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers including Chocolate Tones, Forest Tones, with the latest addition being the Eneloop Tones Expedition.”

Good reference about comma usage that I happened to find:

Hyphenation:
http://www.marywood.edu/marketing/brand/editorial-guide/hyphenation.html

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DoubleA & SoCalTiger used to be my English teachers

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whahaha.. Well, I`m definitely glad they help me out!!

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Thanks Millerman and SocalTiger, I appreciate it! I will go and make these changes.

SocalTiger, that last link is like a few hours of study for me. Thanks for the help!

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If you don’t find your eneloop question answered below, use the details on my Contact page (insert link) or Facebook (insert link) to ask me!

Fetch my contact details from my Contact page, or go to the eneloop101 facebook page.

Neither Sanyo nor Panasonic have ever made 9V eneloops.

And I agree that all the backticks throughout the text look strange and should be replaced with apostrophes.

4AA for me please

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Safely warms your feet while your’e taking a nap or while you’re driving.

it’s You’re.

I would like 4AA.

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> aka, Eneloop Wikipedia.

I suggest:
Eneloopedia

(is Wikipedia trademarked - Google Search)

4xAA

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Could be improved with, It was a dark and stormy night when Sanyo……………….

4AA

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Actually, in this case, the literal reading of that sentence would be, “… 70% of it is full capacity…”, so no apostrophe at all would be appropriate. (“… 70% of its full capacity…”) <<<- oops, Pete7874 got that way before me. And I can’t make strikethrough work, so y’all will have to read it again.

But my actual contribution is from the limited editions page:
_Some people used to write something (like a letter or a number) on each battery to know what batteries belonged together.
Because it is not recommended to mix old with new batteries, because this can result in a damaged (reverse-charged) battery! With The limited edition you don`t have to do this anymore. Just put the same colors or designs together with a certain device! Especially Photographers have been happy with the ltd editions.
_

I’d write it as this:
Some people used to write something (like a letter or a number) on each battery to know what batteries belonged together.
This is done because it is not recommended to mix old with new batteries, because this can result in a damaged (reverse-charged) battery! With the limited edition, you don’t have to do this anymore. Just put the same colors or designs together with a certain device! Photographers in particular have been happy with the limited editions.

This is a great project you’ve put together. Double A batteries please, if I’m so lucky.