“Some are more obvious then others.”

"We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wkipedia." The first error is simple, 'We' should be We have or 'We've', so the sentence should start with We've got you covered.. Additionally, a comma after 'covered', would be appropriate. Finally (I don't know if this rule applies in 'American English', the name Eneloop should always start with a capital E. Corrected sentence: We've got you covered, with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to Eneloops on this website, referred to as the Eneloop Encyclopedia, aka, Eneloop Wikipedia. Of course, I could be wrong, because, I does talk reall different from how I does type eh..

4 AAA is my choice if lucky  

Thanks.

“In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5th year anniversary “

Should be: In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5 year anniversary
Or In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5th anniversary

4AAA for me please

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The KIR-SE1 heats up till about 43 degrees Celsius provides about 5 hours of continuous warming.

The KIR-SE1 heats up till about 43 degrees Celsius, provides about 5 hours of continuous warming.

Missing comma after Celsius.

Update: combining my later posts into this one to make it a single post according to request by OP.

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Safe warming your feet while taking a nap, or use it while driving. With the built in timer it will automatically turn off.

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Portable warmer, which can also be used plugged into a wall socket.

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Including a USB port to charge your mobile devices at 500mA

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Solar charger that you can fold in half, with battery built-in to charger at 5V

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The device itself can Not charge the AA batteries and need to be charged externally.

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Rechargeable lithium battery (7350 mAh)with two outputs of 9V with a maximum of 2000mA. Used for musical instruments, like a Distortion./Over drive , Digital delay / Digital reverb. Including power adapter to use with 100-240V.

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The DS2AS is made for the Nintendo DS Lite (not 3ds) and the cord that is attached is not replaceable. So if you want to use a normal USB cable, you need the normal stick booster.

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You can put your Nintendo Wii controller in this dock to charge the batteries.

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Please note that the product code is universal used even for different power packs.

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Sanyo eneloop products 2005-2013
Below products have been produced from 2005 till about 2013. Most products however are very hard to come by.

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Anyhow it never made it into production so we might never actually now any more details.

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To charge your dedicated battery packs wireless with Qi. (not the AA batteries in the middle of the photograph) When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these kind of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design.

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A Japanese website displayed all these kinds of eneloop Universe product:

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I don`t have a clue what this is

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With the small font! But I can`t make up what the device is that these are in

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But looking at the 2 buttons on the side it might be a wireless vacuum cleaner as well. Oh.. Actually. the round piece that is attached to the wall might be the charge station. And the longer piece is able to be taken off that hook, so it can be used as a vacuum cleaner! … I guess…

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Eneloop marchandise

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Through multiple eneloop promotions around the world there have been lots of special merchandise out there.

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Not very exciting, but i also found this one on their Facebook EU page

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This would indicate there is still some charge left. I does not indicate how much is left.

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And probably a day or 2 earliers as I have been able to get limited edition eneloops a few days before actual release date

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Since eneloopy appeared in the early days of the eneloop hype the following items are rare and difficult to find.

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If somebody know where to get them, please let me know.

In “Sanyo eneloop 2nd Generation”

X For the full line-up of alle eneloop …..

> For a full line-up of all eneloop …..

For me 4*AAA please

Edit: when in doubt, write the brand name exactly as the company does: eneloop, not Eneloop.
Generation is just another word => 2nd generation

“Where should I store my batteries? And at what temperature?

You are best of storing it in a dry cool place.

A better sentence would be:
“Your best bet would be storing them in a cool, dry place”
or
“Your best bet would be…”

4AA please, thanks for the GAW.

Clever idea! You get your website text reviewed and edited, and in exchange, we get a great giveaway!

I’m NOT in for this one, as I’ve got all the Eneloops I need from when you used to sell them here.

“First make sure what you want to use the charger for,”

Suggested: “First, determine your intended purpose: “

4AA

Under Eneloop prototype products

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Eneloop charger board:

To charge your dedicated battery packs wireless with Qi. (not the batteries in the middle of the photograph) When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these kind of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design. They are now called QE-TM101.

When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these types of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design.

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I also learned to have an emergency kit ready at hand,at home, filled with drink, food and spare eneloop and lithium AA batteries and a few flashlights.

Thanks for the GAW.

Not in!

As a fellow fan of Eneloops I’d happily assist without compensation. Just let me know when you’d like proofreading.

With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.

Should be: With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.

4AA for me please.

Count me in,

Here are some corrections I would suggest.

Original / Corrected

Main page

Eneloop: simply the best! / Eneloop: Simply the best!
to be the top in the NiMH battery industry till today. / to be the top in the NiMH battery industry to this day.
Special editions batteries / Special edition batteries
All chargers 2005-today / All chargers 2005 – Today
not all of their chargers are good / not all of their chargers are good.
called Dumb chargers / called dumb chargers
warmer, even bicycles and more. / warmer, bicycles and more.

From eneloop test results page

can have an advantage is very low current devices / can have an advantage in very low current devices
Eneloops are not only powerful but also some very high quality cells that track close. / Eneloops are not only powerful high quality cells, they are consistent from cell to cell
The next test is done for a comparison / The next test is a comparison

From full line up 2005-2017 page

For the full line-up of alle eneloop limited / special edition / For the full line-up of all eneloop limited / special edition
An interesting observation that this generation / An interesting observation is that this generation
Launch date: 2014/2015 depending on the market) (*2) / Launch date: 2014/2015 (depending on the market) (*2)

From Special edition batteries page

From 2009 eneloop`s / From 2009 eneloop
there have been made exactly 21 different kinds of limited editions / there has been 21 different kinds of limited edition batteries made

Will post later some other corrections I find…

Thanks!

So many corrections, do you regret the givaway already, Chibi?

I’m in,
It all sounds a bit too Dutch to me.
Try not to make it sound too Dutch.

Happy to help edit, here’s a suggested improvement to the first paragraph:

Eneloop: simply the best!

You get to know everything about eneloops Learn more information about the history of eneloop batteries, and which are the best value today.

We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wikipedia.

I’d delete this sentence since it offers no value.

Eneloop batteries were (changed to plural to be consistent) first introduced in November 2005 by Sanyo Japan. Tests have continued to show that these are the best performing batteries in the industry.

In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries. In 2009 limited they also produced a Tones edition and in 2010 their first Low capacity version, (for low-drain devices) the Eneloop Lite. In the same year, a high-capacity model (for high-drain devices) was also produced and was called Eneloop XX/PRO.

In general, the language is pretty rough, but you should be focusing on your site benefits, not just the history of eneloop.

*List of specialized battery chargers and analyzers

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Charging batteries can be very easey…

easey should be easy

*Rewrapped eneloops Sony CycleEnergy AA: NH-AA-B4GN AAA: NH-AAA-B4GN

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This is just 1 reason why I don`t like to put any eneloop.

You said: Since then they regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers

I think updated should be update since updated is past tense. So you should have this instead: “Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”, or this “Since then they have regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”

In the FAQ section (and on other occasions) you used an accent character instead of an apostrophe:

“…, you can only charge it till 70% of it`s full capacity.”

Use either “it’s” or “it’s”.

(AA)

Lilien wrote:

In the FAQ section (and on other occasions) you used an accent character instead of an apostrophe:

“…, you can only charge it till 70% of it`s full capacity.”

Use either “it’s” or “it’s”.

(AA)

Special editions batteries sounds weird, maybe go with “Special edition batteries” instead?

I need AAA’s if I win

The same sentence “In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries……. Eneloop XX/PRO” is written twice on the first page. Is it a mistake ?
(AA)

Located one at http://eneloop101.com/batteries/rewrapped-batteries/
Mainly avaialble in Europe and Asia
Thanks for the giveaway!

In the About page, there’s the “my official name is” that irks my pedantic self a bit. I think it’s better to just say “my name is” or if you really want to be specific then “my real name is” or even “my legal name is”.

I already have 2 dozens of AAA for home use, so if I win I’d love to have some AAs Thank you.

thanks for GAW, need some AAA’s

on the rewrapped batteries page:

-But since FDK is owned by Fujitsu there are more and more batteries out there that have a “eneloop” inside of them.
replace letter a with the word an

In the next sentence replace follow with read, and maybe use one to one instead of one on one
-That being said, if you follow the following list carefully, you`ll see that they are not always one on one copies.

Use the TOP menu to get to all the pages

Use the menu on the top of the page to Navigate this Website

4AA

thanks
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I can always use more AAs.

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• I would replace “A list of characteristics on how to spot some counterfeits.” with simply “How to spot counterfeits.”
• I personally don’t like how the introductory paragraph reads. I would replace it with this: “Welcome to eneloop101.com aka Eneloop Encyclopedia aka Eneloop Wikipedia.We`ve got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to Eneloops!”
• “Both, Sanyo and Panasonic made some interesting chargers.” Remove the comma.
• “The sad thing is that not all of their chargers are good”. Personal preference: I would change “The sad thing is that” to “Unfortunately”.
• “In 2009 limited they also produced a Tones edition and in 2010 their first Low capacity version”. Do not capitalize “Low”. Also change it to “low-capacity” (add hyphen).
• “For the complete line-up of all 21 special editions watch All limited edition Eneloop batteries”. I would change the word “watch” to “see”.
• “Watch all the Eneloop products (Eneloop Universe) ever produced”. Change to: “Click here to see all the products that Eneloop has ever produced (Eneloop Universe)” or more simply: “See all the products that Eneloop has ever produced (Eneloop Universe)”
• In the last paragraph, in one place you have Eneloop Universe surrounded by single quotes and later on with double quotes ‘ vs “. Make them consistent. I would use double quotes “
• “In 2009 Sanyo released their first limited edition eneloops, called Eneloop tones.” > “In 2009 Sanyo released their first limited edition Eneloops, called Eneloop Tones.”
• “In 2010 Sanyo Eneloop celebrated their 5 year anniversary with a special edition Eneloop, called Eneloop Tones Glitter. Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers including Chocolate tones, Forest tones, with the latest addition being the Eneloop tones expedition.” > “In 2010 Sanyo Eneloop celebrated their 5 year anniversary with a special edition Eneloop, called Eneloop Tones Glitter. Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers including Chocolate Tones, Forest Tones, with the latest addition being the Eneloop Tones Expedition.”

Good reference about comma usage that I happened to find:
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/

Hyphenation:
http://www.marywood.edu/marketing/brand/editorial-guide/hyphenation.html