Eneloop Give Away.
Rules:
1. Be a BLF member from before: November 21, 2017
2. Have more than 5 posts.
3. Only post ONCE in this thread per person. If you find more mistakes great, but put them into 1 post.
4. Not a member who mostly just participates in giveaways on BLF.
How to enter:
I need an extra pair of (English) eyes.
- Please visit the eneloop101.com website and simply find any sentence that is incorrect, strange, unclear, could-be-improved, has wrong grammar, is-plain-stupid, is-too-Dutch... (that shouldn`t be too difficult
)
- A. Post the sentence in your reply plus the "better version" (no need to link or anything as I can find them easily)
- B. If you can`t find any mistakes please just post what you like to see being added to the site
- Tell me whether you prefer to receive 4AA or 4AAA batteries when you win.
- This one is NOT a requirement to enter:if you`d like please give the eneloop101 facebook page a thumbsup. (I will probably do some sort of giveaway for the facebook page members in the future as well)
Example post:
You can make up your own text of course
"envelopes are rechargeable batteries" Should be: Eneloops are rechargeable batteries 4AA for me please |
Closing date: I will close the giveaway somewhere around Black Friday....or Cyber Monday..... or.......
I will use Random.org to draw a number
What you`ll get?
4-pack of AA or AAA std eneloop batteries
I will order the batteries directly from an online store and let them ship them to the winner
If you want to enter, but can`t find any (new/other) mistakes because your English isn`t your mother tongue, just let me know... and I can come up with something else just for you guys.
List of participants. (Should have reserved post 1 for that
- Tatasal
- eebowler
- zulumoose
- DoubleA
- Henk4U2
- FPV
- Pete7874
- vwpieces
- Agro
- Litefighter
- an0nemus
- AlexGT
- nquinn
- dekozn
- SIGShooter
- Lilien
- Lionheart_2281
- Alcius
- titobustillo
- LG
- Blackbeard
- millerman
- SoCalTiger
- argolite
- dealgrabber2002
- hank
- brad (questionable suggestion
- ruffles
- asot
- octav
- samgalax
- Bort
- CJ Avlis
- pirate joe 22
- fx10a
- fran82
- jf_smm
- teacher
The winner will contacted through PM. He/She has 3 days to reply before I do another draw.
And the winner is #19
“Some are more obvious then others.”
"We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wkipedia." The first error is simple, 'We' should be We have or 'We've', so the sentence should start with We've got you covered.. Additionally, a comma after 'covered', would be appropriate. Finally (I don't know if this rule applies in 'American English', the name Eneloop should always start with a capital E. Corrected sentence: We've got you covered, with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to Eneloops on this website, referred to as the Eneloop Encyclopedia, aka, Eneloop Wikipedia. Of course, I could be wrong, because, I does talk reall different from how I does type eh..
4 AAA is my choice if lucky
Thanks.
My gratitude to those who are willing and able to help others (in whatever way you can)! Being human is more than just existing for yourself.
“In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5th year anniversary “
Should be: In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5 year anniversary
Or In 2010 Sanyo eneloop celebrated their 5th anniversary
4AAA for me please
Beam me up!
The KIR-SE1 heats up till about 43 degrees Celsius, provides about 5 hours of continuous warming.
Missing comma after Celsius.
Update: combining my later posts into this one to make it a single post according to request by OP.
Safely warms your feet while your’e taking a nap or while you’re driving. It will turn off automatically with it’s built-in timer.
Portable warmer which can also be used while plugged into a wall socket.
Includes a USB port to charge your mobile devices at 500mA
Solar charger that can be folded in half, with a battery built-in to the 5V USB charger.
The device itself cannot charge those AA batteries, so they have to be charged separately.
Rechargeable lithium battery pack of 7350mAh capacity with two outputs of 9V each with a maximum of 2000mA. Used for musical instruments like a Distortion/Over drive, Digital delay/Digital reverb etc. Includes a power adapter to use with 100-240V AC.
The DS2AS is made for the Nintendo DS Lite (not 3ds) and the cord that is attached to it is not replaceable. So if you want to use a normal USB cable you will need the normal stick booster.
You can place your Nintendo Wii controller in this dock to charge it’s batteries.
Please note that the product code is universally used, even for different power packs.
Products listed below have been produced from 2005 till about 2013. However, most of these products are very hard to come by.
Anyhow it never made it into production, so we might never actually know any more details.
To charge your dedicated battery packs wirelessly with Qi (not the batteries in the middle of the photograph). When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these kind of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design.
A Japanese website displayed all kinds of these Eneloop Universe products:
I don`t have a clue to what this is
With the small font! But I can`t make up what is the device that these are in.
But looking at the 2 buttons on the front, it might be a wireless vacuum cleaner as well. Oh, actually the round piece that is attached to the wall might be it’s charge station, and you might be able to take the longer piece off from that hook, so that it can be used as a vacuum cleaner?… I guess…
Eneloop merchandise
Through multiple Eneloop promotions around the world, there has been lots of special merchandise out there.
Not very exciting, but I also found this one on their Facebook EU page.
This would indicate if there is still some charge left, but it does not indicate how much charge is left.
Probably a day or two earlier as I was able to get limited edition Eneloops a few days before actual release date.
Since Eneloopy appeared in the early days of the Eneloop hype, the following items are rare and difficult to find.
If somebody knows where to get them, please let me know.
and on the first day he said "Let there be light"...
In “Sanyo eneloop 2nd Generation”
X For the full line-up of alle eneloop …..
> For a full line-up of all eneloop …..
For me 4*AAA please
Edit: when in doubt, write the brand name exactly as the company does: eneloop, not Eneloop.
Generation is just another word => 2nd generation
You are a flashaholic if you are forced to come out of the closet, to make room for more flashlights.
“Where should I store my batteries? And at what temperature?
You are best of storing it in a dry cool place.
A better sentence would be:
“Your best bet would be storing them in a cool, dry place”
or
“Your best bet would be…”
4AA please, thanks for the GAW.
New review: Wuben TO40R XPL2 18650
Clever idea! You get your website text reviewed and edited, and in exchange, we get a great giveaway!
I’m NOT in for this one, as I’ve got all the Eneloops I need from when you used to sell them here.
The Cycle of Goodness: “No one prospers without rendering benefit to others”
- The YKK Philosophy
“First make sure what you want to use the charger for,”
Suggested: “First, determine your intended purpose: “
4AA
Under Eneloop prototype products
When Panasonic took over Sanyo, these types of charger boards made it into production, but with a different design.
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Missing space after a comma:
I also learned to have an emergency kit ready at hand, at home, filled with drink, food and spare eneloop and lithium AA batteries and a few flashlights.
Thanks for the GAW.
Not in!
As a fellow fan of Eneloops I’d happily assist without compensation. Just let me know when you’d like proofreading.
With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.
Should be: With the official closing of the Sanyo trademark in Japan in March 2012, "eneloop universe" stopped as well. Some products like the mobile boosters were being improved and sold under the Panasonic brand.
4AA for me please.
Count me in,
Here are some corrections I would suggest.
Original / Corrected
Main page
Eneloop: simply the best! / Eneloop: Simply the best!
to be the top in the NiMH battery industry till today. / to be the top in the NiMH battery industry to this day.
Special editions batteries / Special edition batteries
All chargers 2005-today / All chargers 2005 – Today
not all of their chargers are good / not all of their chargers are good.
called Dumb chargers / called dumb chargers
warmer, even bicycles and more. / warmer, bicycles and more.
From eneloop test results page
can have an advantage is very low current devices / can have an advantage in very low current devices
Eneloops are not only powerful but also some very high quality cells that track close. / Eneloops are not only powerful high quality cells, they are consistent from cell to cell
The next test is done for a comparison / The next test is a comparison
From full line up 2005-2017 page
For the full line-up of alle eneloop limited / special edition / For the full line-up of all eneloop limited / special edition
An interesting observation that this generation / An interesting observation is that this generation
Launch date: 2014/2015 depending on the market) (*2) / Launch date: 2014/2015 (depending on the market) (*2)
From Special edition batteries page
From 2009 eneloop`s / From 2009 eneloop
there have been made exactly 21 different kinds of limited editions / there has been 21 different kinds of limited edition batteries made
Will post later some other corrections I find…
Thanks!
So many corrections, do you regret the givaway already, Chibi?

link to djozz tests
I’m in,
It all sounds a bit too Dutch to me.
Try not to make it sound too Dutch.
Love the comments.
Thanks everyone, keep them coming.
Well, I have asked it before, but without many replies about the content, so this way I can at least get some real feedback
yeehaa
Uhmmm kind of
The Eneloop 2005-2021 info thread
Happy to help edit, here’s a suggested improvement to the first paragraph:
Eneloop: simply the best!
You get to know everything about eneloopsLearn more information about the history of eneloop batteries, and which are the best value today.We got you covered with almost 20 pages of information dedicated to eneloops on this website, referred to as the eneloop encyclopedia, aka eneloop wikipedia.I’d delete this sentence since it offers no value.
Eneloop batteries were (changed to plural to be consistent) first introduced in November 2005 by Sanyo Japan. Tests have continued to show that these are the best performing batteries in the industry.
In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries. In 2009 limited they also produced a Tones edition and in 2010 their first Low capacity version, (for low-drain devices) the Eneloop Lite. In the same year, a high-capacity model (for high-drain devices) was also produced and was called Eneloop XX/PRO.
In general, the language is pretty rough, but you should be focusing on your site benefits, not just the history of eneloop.
*List of specialized battery chargers and analyzers
easey should be easy
*Rewrapped eneloops Sony CycleEnergy AA: NH-AA-B4GN AAA: NH-AAA-B4GN
doesn’t make sense
Idiot proofing something only creates improved idiots.
You said: Since then they regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers
I think updated should be update since updated is past tense. So you should have this instead: “Since then they regularly update their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”, or this “Since then they have regularly updated their special edition line-up with many kinds of wrappers”
9mm/40cal/45cal bullets and large/small pistol primers available for sale in San Francisco Bay area
I think I got everything changed up till now.
nquinn has a good point about the homepage. I will probably delete quite a bit of text and focus on the benefits of the site... good idea. Just don`t know how much to delete yet.
The Eneloop 2005-2021 info thread
In the FAQ section (and on other occasions) you used an accent character instead of an apostrophe:
“…, you can only charge it till 70% of it`s full capacity.”
Use either “it’s” or “it’s”.
(AA)
Actually it should be “its” without an apostrophe.
Special editions batteries sounds weird, maybe go with “Special edition batteries” instead?
I need AAA’s if I win
The same sentence “In 2007 Sanyo also started producing C and D size batteries……. Eneloop XX/PRO” is written twice on the first page. Is it a mistake ?
(AA)
Located one at http://eneloop101.com/batteries/rewrapped-batteries/
Mainly avaialble in Europe and Asia
Thanks for the giveaway!
In the About page, there’s the “my official name is” that irks my pedantic self a bit. I think it’s better to just say “my name is” or if you really want to be specific then “my real name is” or even “my legal name is”.
I already have 2 dozens of AAA for home use, so if I win I’d love to have some AAs
Thank you.
thanks for GAW, need some AAA’s
on the rewrapped batteries page:
-But since FDK is owned by Fujitsu there are more and more batteries out there that have a “eneloop” inside of them.
replace letter a with the word an
In the next sentence replace follow with read, and maybe use one to one instead of one on one
-That being said, if you follow the following list carefully, you`ll see that they are not always one on one copies.
Updated the site with the new ideas, thanks all! Keep them coming. Or for people who can't find anything, please read rule 3B
The Eneloop 2005-2021 info thread
Use the TOP menu to get to all the pages
Use the menu on the top of the page to Navigate this Website
4AA
thanks
thumbs up on facebook
This space intentionally left blank…..
I can always use more AAs.
Homepage:
Good reference about comma usage that I happened to find:
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/
Hyphenation:
http://www.marywood.edu/marketing/brand/editorial-guide/hyphenation.html
SoCalTiger
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