That was quick for your first time! And it looks pretty good too.

Do you not need a GND ring ? (The thin exposed line most likely wont be there because board houses remove copper ~0.2mm from the edges).

0603 size diode is SOD-523, the one on pcb looks like 323 ?
A 2020 FET is ample enough, even up to 14500 triple or 18650 single LED lights, DMN1004UFDF is the current best one at about 5mR.
0402 is also an option if more room is needed for a GND ring, equivalent diode case is SOD-923.

What’s the schematic ? Is R1 R2 a batt level voltage divider ? Because voltage can be sensed from the VCC pin.